Monday, April 30, 2007

MAA

Bohot katheen hai samajhna usko,
Kya kya nahi sehti jo is jeevan main,
Nibhana padta hai har rishta usko,
Phir bhi rehti hai duk aur taklif main,
Yehi hoti hai "MAA"..

Humein laane ke liye is jeevan main,
Kya kya nahi sehti hai woh,
Gujarti hain kitni taklifon se,
Phir bhi sine se laga rakhti hai woh,
Yehi hoti hai "MAA"..

Apni ungli pakadkar chalna sikhati hai,
Apna pyar humare andar dalna chahti hai,
Sambhalkar rakhti hai hamesha apne sath,
Bachati hai karne se galat koi baat,
Yehi hoti hai "MAA"..

Phir uske jeevan main ek naya daur ata hai,
Jahan man ke saath sharir bhi sath chod deta hai,
Aur tab parakthi hai woh apno ko....
Jinko ungli pakadkar chalna sikhaya tha ...
Aaj woh usi ko hath dene main katrate hai...
Maa ke jeevan main kitne nirale mod aate hai,
Yehi hoti hai "MAA"..

Phir bhi bura nahi manti hai woh,
Sehti hai har pal ke dard ko,
Aur santosht rehti hai sirf isi baat se,
Ki apne kartavya ko nibhaya hai usne poora jazbaat se,
Yehi hoti hai "MAA"..

Ye to humari bhool hai jo hum use dard dete hain,
Maa hai sab sahegi aisa hum sochte hain,
Uski pida ka anubhav shayad humein aaj na ho,
Par kal hum bhi usi jagah par honge ye bhi jante hain..

Haan yehi hoti hai "MAA" jo sab kuch sehkar bhi saath deti hai, pyar karti hai,ladti bhi hai jhagadti bhi hai...par phir bhi moodkar gale se laga leti hai, par jab naa chahte hue bhi uski taklifen uske bachon ko dard deti hai to wahi MAA phoot phoot kar roti bhi hai kyunki woh apne dard aur taklifon ko apne bachon se door rakhna chahti hai taaki unhe bhi uska hissa naa banan pade... Bas ek bacche ko janam dena maa ka kaam nahi hai par use ek accha insan banan, usmein ache gun dalna use acche bure ka matlba sikhana, use ye sikhana ki burai bhi taklif ko bhi haste hue gala lagana..... lekin sab kuch hone ke baad use badle main kya milta hai ise to sara jag janta hai....

3 comments:

David Antony said...

poetically, there is a rhyme and flow problem here..... i guessu can phrase it better - and it will be a master piece

but having said that - the pain, and the feeling for a mother - comes through so stronggggly... it made me think and retrospect.... good effort - i felt the feelings when i read it...

Preet said...

achi hai...."maa" ke bare mein kafi ache se kikha hai...the reality is very well brought out!!!!!!
a bit of a prob in wordings...bt dats ok...cud hv been better....yet its good!!!!!!!!!! :)

Gadget Guy said...

kuchh jyada hi achchhi hai...
its really great...